A Bitch Called Hope

evilmonkey · Post by **evilmonkey** » Sun Jan 25, 2004 11:14 pm

again C&C wanted - so do reply and tell me what you think. EDIT [changed the barrel symbol and added a bullet - changed the symbol of person to furter reflect that nature of I (being anyone)]

EDIT 2 [made the small head larger - version before can be seen here ]

EDIT 3 [Lowered the shoulder as well]

PS. This is getting silly - someone else better post some more art in there before I make an other, so get at it or something. DS.

The Gaijin · Post by **The Gaijin** » Sun Jan 25, 2004 11:57 pm

Her arm and torso seems a little too long, but I like the hair--it's almost like feathers.

Interesting linework, adds a lot of...hm, what's the word...texture, I guess. Gives the picture a jumbled sort of feeling; in a good way, of course. I likes it.

evilmonkey · Post by **evilmonkey** » Mon Jan 26, 2004 12:03 am

The Gaijin wrote:Her arm and torso seems a little too long, but I like the hair--it's almost like feathers.

Interesting linework, adds a lot of...hm, what's the word...texture, I guess. Gives the picture a jumbled sort of feeling; in a good way, of course. I likes it.

the head got somewhat small - I guess I aimed for a taller woman, but damn heh it didn't go exacly as I aimed when I roll back the chair and look at it from a distance.

might or might not fix that, perhaps just a resize of parts of the character layer (but now that would give somewhat thicker linework on the head then on the rest of the body...)

anyway thanks.

EDIT [I made the head somewhat larger - I think I actually over did it and it got too large *g* - And I lowered the shoulder, I aimed to make this 80s huge jacket shoulder, but it never worked I guess -but the hand still feels large I guess - oh well I need to study and then jump in bed so no more tonight]

Shino · Post by **Shino** » Mon Jan 26, 2004 1:12 pm

I like the style, tried that myself some time ago, has something sketchy about it, as I said, I like it.