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is it just me or does 4too write messages like a prophetic foriegner with a bad "big brother" complex.
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4too makes the English language sexy.
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I'm never quite sure if I read something or not after 4too is done, but I'm always impressed by something. Its hard to argue with writing I cant pick apart.
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Yeah, it's even harder for people not having english as a primary language.


Still, I wonder who he is, he must be a writer or something.
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4too's pretty cool, I'd wager he's an acid addict or something. I doubt he's a writer, though, his style is mostly just a rip off of William S. Burroughs-style cut-and-paste (right down to the same spelling mistakes and messed-up paragraph structure). Still, he's a pretty smart fucker, and his stuff makes for a good read. I don't see why you people would call it hard to understand, though. He just uses the occasional metaphor, is all.

Perhaps the real 4too could be revealed?
suppose you're thinking about a plate of shrimp. suddenly somebody will say like 'plate' or 'shrimp' or 'plate of shrimp', out of the blue, no explanation.
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s4ur0n27 wrote:Yeah, it's even harder for people not having english as a primary language.
That's why it's hard to understand.
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I take it back, its not hard to understand, just unusual. He gets "mad props" for some of the crazy shit hes written.
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CloudNineGT wrote:I take it back, its not hard to understand, just unusual. He gets "mad props" for some of the crazy shit hes written.
I agree whole heartedly. His disjointed paragraphs and quirky cut and paste writing is a pain in the ass to read but he makes good points.
Blargh wrote:While the way in which the stance is made could be done with at least a pretense of civility - being far more conducive to others actually paying attention than copious swearing - it just wouldn't be Mandy otherwise.
S4ur0n27 wrote:Dexter is getting MFG'ed for the first time D:
Koki wrote:He must be Mandallorian FaLLouT God'ded ASAP :salute:
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I like his writing & it's one of the things that keeps me coming back here for more. I often don't agree with his viewpoint or slant but it's a rare post by 4too that doesn't make me smile.

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These are some vailed versions of "strokes".

But as for the autopsy of my sentance strucure ....

The blending of multiple regionalisms with the nascent dialect has insured that "Formal Grammatical Essay Structured English" is a second language for this 4too. So, thus, the throaty aura of 'smoke', and the minty reflection in the after taste that 'mirrors' more substancial vintages. Not polite enough for the table, but a fine mouth wash none the less ...
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Institutional Construct

The life of Eric Blair was/is an inspiration in formenting my 'political' world view.

The "Big Brother" construct is "like" that old glass, attributed to zen pranksters, to fill with ones' thoughts. A stasis field to pool the tides of infotainment so we may look into the ocean of human events. The double edged nature of this intellectual convenience maybe hiding in this paraphase: "todays actions are a result of yesterday's thoughts". So we must be carefull "what we wish for ..."


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Biege Haze

A quest for the fount of 4too?

Every days' array of boredom will save any 'seekers' from the narcolepsy that lurks in these relevations.

You'll wake up with the 'necessary' realivation that you have to pee, and then turn out the light in the weed .... while in the weed, you might find a Fred Flinstone Jelly Jar to pour something thoughtful in ...

Nothing special in this specificity.

Pursuing the Tale Of 4too would be ... if not circular .... a 60 cycle
'ellipsis' on a flickering antique analogue oscillosscope ...

Forever obsured by the many shades of biege.



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Well there we go, another thing I read twice. My internet is being retarded, I but itll double post.

Edit: yay.
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see?
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I think Big Brother somehow influenced everyone, even people who didn't actually read it. The concept just implanted itself in everyone's mind.
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atoga wrote:Perhaps the real 4too could be revealed?
4too wrote:
A quest for the fount of 4too?

Every days' array of boredom will save any 'seekers' from the narcolepsy that lurks in these relevations.

You'll wake up with the 'necessary' realivation that you have to pee, and then turn out the light in the weed .... while in the weed, you might find a Fred Flinstone Jelly Jar to pour something thoughtful in ...

Nothing special in this specificity.

Pursuing the Tale Of 4too would be ... if not circular .... a 60 cycle
'ellipsis' on a flickering antique analogue oscillosscope ...

Forever obsured by the many shades of biege.
I guess not, then?
suppose you're thinking about a plate of shrimp. suddenly somebody will say like 'plate' or 'shrimp' or 'plate of shrimp', out of the blue, no explanation.
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Post by Mandalorian FaLLouT GoD »

he writes like a poet and doesnt even know it.

i cant believe anyone can write like that without having to plan out paragraphs like that. You can take all the comments in the paragraph atoga posted many different ways.
Blargh wrote:While the way in which the stance is made could be done with at least a pretense of civility - being far more conducive to others actually paying attention than copious swearing - it just wouldn't be Mandy otherwise.
S4ur0n27 wrote:Dexter is getting MFG'ed for the first time D:
Koki wrote:He must be Mandallorian FaLLouT God'ded ASAP :salute:
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4too should come to the RPGCodex. He is unappreciated here.
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4too wrote: Lookin' fo me?

I'm boring.

I just pissed in a jelly jar.

I'm not special

I am Jesus

I'm white.
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Post by 4too »

Smothers' Brothers

CloudNineGT:
... ... ... ... I am Jesus ...
Well, aiming high are we?

Well, we're all THE SON of something.

And we all know ""that mom always liked you best ... ""

Oh, Dad said it was your turn to part the Red Sea.


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Those Jews can save themselves this time.
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