Are we going to do a round robin here, too?
I'll try to chip in with chapter 5...I've got a dentist appointment for a cavity and I'm just in a bit too much pain to do much right now.
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Chapter 3 is up, let me know if anything needs to change, or if I broke any rules.
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Let's straithen everything out.
Archchancellor wrote chapter 1
I wrote chapter 2
Section8 wrote chapter 3
Is Pyro going to write chapter 4 and Elara chapter 5?
And if so is the case, will the next chapter for me to write be chapter 7?
And could someone send a mod to this thread, Archchancellor seems to be having trouble with the posting or something as I can currently ready three posts by him looking all the same...
Archchancellor wrote chapter 1
I wrote chapter 2
Section8 wrote chapter 3
Is Pyro going to write chapter 4 and Elara chapter 5?
And if so is the case, will the next chapter for me to write be chapter 7?
And could someone send a mod to this thread, Archchancellor seems to be having trouble with the posting or something as I can currently ready three posts by him looking all the same...
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Chapter 4
Rayen lit a thin cigarette and flicked on his night vision goggles. He had been following the wagon all day and now the cool night had settled in. It had stopped outside a small warehouse, with a few guards sleeping around. Rayen squatted slightly, then ran down a sandy embankment and hid behind a burnt out car. He reached into his pocket and picked out a small mouse and some jet. He smiled to himself as he put the rubber funnel over the small mouse then sprayed it, immediately feeling the mouse wriggle in his hands as pure adrenaline poured through it's tiny body. Quickly he brought out a small piece of metal, and clicked the top then it started beeping. He then put the mouse on the floor, aiming it in the direction of the warehouse. It immediately shot off, running straight towards the warehouse while the jet blinded it in. It ran into the wall as the small piece of metal started beeping faster and more louder, then the mouse suddenly slammed into the wall. It looked around, dazed when suddenly the small land mine of on its back went off. The explosion awoke the guards, who ran to the small fire immediately, then tried to stamp it out. Rayen gave a thin smile as he ran towards the warehouse front door and jumped behind some barrels to look around.
The warehouse was lit by a few strobe lights, with old cars and weapons lying everywhere. A small dried out patch of blood lay in the centre of the cracked cement floor and at the side was a small office and a man screaming into the radio. Rayen looked around, making sure there were no guards there and quickly jogged towards the office and up to the door. He stopped for a minute and drew out his pistol, then knocked on it lightly. "Who the hell is it?" the man shouted. Rayen kept knocking as the man shouted at him again. He heard the scrape of a chair and small footsteps as the door swung open. "Who the fu-" Rayen poked his pistol under the mans chin and slowly walked inside. Rayen pointed the pistol to the chair and brought out a piece of wire, tying the mans arms to the chair-arms. He pointed the pistol to the mans greasy forehead and said:
"Where is she" Diestler woke up, the chamber almost in total darkness except for a small light above his head. "W-Who"said Diestler, shaking his head around. "The girl,Sarah." The voice echoed slightly, sounding calm, but yet slightly angry. Diestler looked around, trying to stand up. He fell almost straight away. He looked down at his legs, making sure they were still there.
"Don't worry about your legs, just a mild chem to stop you from running." Said the voice
"Who are you" asked Diestler, now slightly more worried.
"That's for me to know and for you to find out." Said the voice.
The click of a pistol hammer being pulled back suddenly rang through the chamber.
"Where is the girl, or I start shooting."
"I-I don't know, I was about to give her a tour of the place then I fell asleep and..."
A flash in the darkness told Diestler that his mystery captor had fired. He heard the cracking of bone and looked down. He screamed as he saw blood pour out of his leg and make a small puddle on the floor.
"Where is she?" the voice had lost it's calmness know, sounding more like a dog growling.
"I-I don't friggin' know! Listen I have chems all over the place, take what you want just..."
"Well what good are you then?" the voice said hollowly, and pulled the trigger.
Diestler felt the bullet ram through his ribs and looked down shocked. He spat out a bit of blood and collapsed. The murderer hissed, then ran towards the body, bringing up a foot and cracking more ribs. He started firing the gun madly, then silence.
Rayen nodded. The last 5 minutes with this guy had been very interesting. He had learnt that the man worked for someone else, and were just told to get the guy they kidnapped. There employer had took the man a few hours ago. "So uh...are you going to let me go pal?" Rayen looked at the man and smiled. "Nope." Rayen poked the gun into the side of the mans cheek and pulled the trigger, snapping the mans jaw and ripping apart his tongue, spraying blood and teeth everywhere. The man gave a high pitch squeel as he clutched his mouth, while Rayen walked out of the office and got into the wagon. Guards had heard the gunshot and were starting to come into the warehouse now, as Rayen turned the keys in the ignition. The wagon engine roared and head-lights beamed forward, temporarily blinding the guards as the wagon screeched forward. The man had told him his employer went further north, past the mountains. That's where Rayen would go, to.
Diestler woke up again later, rubbing his chest as it throbbed painfully. He un-clipped the bullet-proof jacket he always wore and looked around. He slowly looked round the metal dome and grinned. He was alive. He got up slowly and reached for the drawer full of chems, and opened it, reaching for some stim-packs to take the pain away. Nothing. He looked down and his eyes opened wide. He slammed open another drawer, and another. Someone had cleared out his whole chem collection. He screamed and ran outside, the fresh-air hitting him like a slap. He looked around for some clue where his mystery robber had gone. He then saw some small tyre-tracks in the dirt. He grinned, thinking of what he was going to do to the would-be rober when he found him. He then realised he had been shot in the leg and Diestler collpased. Well...he would get him...after he had a bit of rest.
Rayen lit a thin cigarette and flicked on his night vision goggles. He had been following the wagon all day and now the cool night had settled in. It had stopped outside a small warehouse, with a few guards sleeping around. Rayen squatted slightly, then ran down a sandy embankment and hid behind a burnt out car. He reached into his pocket and picked out a small mouse and some jet. He smiled to himself as he put the rubber funnel over the small mouse then sprayed it, immediately feeling the mouse wriggle in his hands as pure adrenaline poured through it's tiny body. Quickly he brought out a small piece of metal, and clicked the top then it started beeping. He then put the mouse on the floor, aiming it in the direction of the warehouse. It immediately shot off, running straight towards the warehouse while the jet blinded it in. It ran into the wall as the small piece of metal started beeping faster and more louder, then the mouse suddenly slammed into the wall. It looked around, dazed when suddenly the small land mine of on its back went off. The explosion awoke the guards, who ran to the small fire immediately, then tried to stamp it out. Rayen gave a thin smile as he ran towards the warehouse front door and jumped behind some barrels to look around.
The warehouse was lit by a few strobe lights, with old cars and weapons lying everywhere. A small dried out patch of blood lay in the centre of the cracked cement floor and at the side was a small office and a man screaming into the radio. Rayen looked around, making sure there were no guards there and quickly jogged towards the office and up to the door. He stopped for a minute and drew out his pistol, then knocked on it lightly. "Who the hell is it?" the man shouted. Rayen kept knocking as the man shouted at him again. He heard the scrape of a chair and small footsteps as the door swung open. "Who the fu-" Rayen poked his pistol under the mans chin and slowly walked inside. Rayen pointed the pistol to the chair and brought out a piece of wire, tying the mans arms to the chair-arms. He pointed the pistol to the mans greasy forehead and said:
"Where is she" Diestler woke up, the chamber almost in total darkness except for a small light above his head. "W-Who"said Diestler, shaking his head around. "The girl,Sarah." The voice echoed slightly, sounding calm, but yet slightly angry. Diestler looked around, trying to stand up. He fell almost straight away. He looked down at his legs, making sure they were still there.
"Don't worry about your legs, just a mild chem to stop you from running." Said the voice
"Who are you" asked Diestler, now slightly more worried.
"That's for me to know and for you to find out." Said the voice.
The click of a pistol hammer being pulled back suddenly rang through the chamber.
"Where is the girl, or I start shooting."
"I-I don't know, I was about to give her a tour of the place then I fell asleep and..."
A flash in the darkness told Diestler that his mystery captor had fired. He heard the cracking of bone and looked down. He screamed as he saw blood pour out of his leg and make a small puddle on the floor.
"Where is she?" the voice had lost it's calmness know, sounding more like a dog growling.
"I-I don't friggin' know! Listen I have chems all over the place, take what you want just..."
"Well what good are you then?" the voice said hollowly, and pulled the trigger.
Diestler felt the bullet ram through his ribs and looked down shocked. He spat out a bit of blood and collapsed. The murderer hissed, then ran towards the body, bringing up a foot and cracking more ribs. He started firing the gun madly, then silence.
Rayen nodded. The last 5 minutes with this guy had been very interesting. He had learnt that the man worked for someone else, and were just told to get the guy they kidnapped. There employer had took the man a few hours ago. "So uh...are you going to let me go pal?" Rayen looked at the man and smiled. "Nope." Rayen poked the gun into the side of the mans cheek and pulled the trigger, snapping the mans jaw and ripping apart his tongue, spraying blood and teeth everywhere. The man gave a high pitch squeel as he clutched his mouth, while Rayen walked out of the office and got into the wagon. Guards had heard the gunshot and were starting to come into the warehouse now, as Rayen turned the keys in the ignition. The wagon engine roared and head-lights beamed forward, temporarily blinding the guards as the wagon screeched forward. The man had told him his employer went further north, past the mountains. That's where Rayen would go, to.
Diestler woke up again later, rubbing his chest as it throbbed painfully. He un-clipped the bullet-proof jacket he always wore and looked around. He slowly looked round the metal dome and grinned. He was alive. He got up slowly and reached for the drawer full of chems, and opened it, reaching for some stim-packs to take the pain away. Nothing. He looked down and his eyes opened wide. He slammed open another drawer, and another. Someone had cleared out his whole chem collection. He screamed and ran outside, the fresh-air hitting him like a slap. He looked around for some clue where his mystery robber had gone. He then saw some small tyre-tracks in the dirt. He grinned, thinking of what he was going to do to the would-be rober when he found him. He then realised he had been shot in the leg and Diestler collpased. Well...he would get him...after he had a bit of rest.
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It's allright Arch, is Elara writing Chapter 5 or who is?
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Yes, I thought your part was good Pyro.
But didn't you say Rayen killed Diestler? And then he was alive again, and also I wonder how Rayen managed to get inside Diestlers place...
But didn't you say Rayen killed Diestler? And then he was alive again, and also I wonder how Rayen managed to get inside Diestlers place...
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Must scratch. itching. under my fucking skin. need. to. write. :twisted:
C'mon Elara, you need to come back so we can make jokes about the dentist "filling" your "cavity".
Sorry 
C'mon Elara, you need to come back so we can make jokes about the dentist "filling" your "cavity".
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And I'd like to write chapter 7, as I've probably got nothing important to do at the end of this week...
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The man smiled bleakly as the sun crested the broken spires of the horizon, the lines of his face crinkling like leather. His sun-faded blue eyes swept from north to south, all the while his gnarled old hands drew his bottle up from the well.
He coughed, a dry hacking sort of wheeze, and sippped the brackish water. His battered, cracked leather armor had pieces of metal bolted to the chest and back. One on his was an overbuilt ten-gauge double-barrelled shotgun, remounted, sawed off and converted into a savage looking handcannon. A long, smooth-edged knife was in a gecko-skin sheath by his boot. His pants were dusty and faded corduroy, loose and baggy. His shirt, under the leather armor, was brown in color and with dust, patched often....
He finished his drinking, capping the waterskin as he licked cracking lips. Turning back, he glanced over the brahmin train.
"Zeer, we got another 20 miles to pull today. You up to it?"
The man so addressed grunted. A huge, sweating and hulkingly muscled savage with dozens of bright tattooes over his body, the darkskinned man lashed a brahmin and kicked the carvan into motion. "You know bettter, Jack. We'll be lucky to reach Deader's Gorge by sunfall..."
Jack adjusted the heavy gun on his hip as he swung up into the saddle of a horse. He checked each brahmin-pulled cart, making sure bindings were tight, goods tied down...
Jack shrugged, and the two men trudged along. These were old hands at traversing the waste. The big tribal had a heavy spear, ten feet long and with an iron head, slung into the back of the wagon. His muscles bulged with every motion, as he tugged at his braided beard, or the dreadlocks that dribbled from the rear of his hair. Jack sipped water , dried out like an old prune, his sharp eyes taking in everything.
Twice they came across the tracks of other carvans, and once stumbled across a shattered wagon, empty. Flies buzzed thickly around a pair of lumps on the ground.....a brahmin and a human shaped figure. Blood was spattered on the ground, on the cart, everywhere...
Jack spit. "Fucking raider slime...." he racked a pair of shells into his shotgun and looked at the tracks. After a long moment of contemplation, he made the sign of the cross over the corpse and spit again.
"Happened in the past day, Zeer....they're still out there."
The tribal grunted. "Run off, more likely....still, we will be cautious." The big mans voice trailed off into a basso grumbling, and he prodded the brahmin forward, towards the city on the horizon, with Jack following.
Long minutes later, a single slender form peeped over the rocks. The gangly raider put his pistol away and smiled.....Red would pay well for another caravan to hit...
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Gareth, stop making fun of me...
He coughed, a dry hacking sort of wheeze, and sippped the brackish water. His battered, cracked leather armor had pieces of metal bolted to the chest and back. One on his was an overbuilt ten-gauge double-barrelled shotgun, remounted, sawed off and converted into a savage looking handcannon. A long, smooth-edged knife was in a gecko-skin sheath by his boot. His pants were dusty and faded corduroy, loose and baggy. His shirt, under the leather armor, was brown in color and with dust, patched often....
He finished his drinking, capping the waterskin as he licked cracking lips. Turning back, he glanced over the brahmin train.
"Zeer, we got another 20 miles to pull today. You up to it?"
The man so addressed grunted. A huge, sweating and hulkingly muscled savage with dozens of bright tattooes over his body, the darkskinned man lashed a brahmin and kicked the carvan into motion. "You know bettter, Jack. We'll be lucky to reach Deader's Gorge by sunfall..."
Jack adjusted the heavy gun on his hip as he swung up into the saddle of a horse. He checked each brahmin-pulled cart, making sure bindings were tight, goods tied down...
Jack shrugged, and the two men trudged along. These were old hands at traversing the waste. The big tribal had a heavy spear, ten feet long and with an iron head, slung into the back of the wagon. His muscles bulged with every motion, as he tugged at his braided beard, or the dreadlocks that dribbled from the rear of his hair. Jack sipped water , dried out like an old prune, his sharp eyes taking in everything.
Twice they came across the tracks of other carvans, and once stumbled across a shattered wagon, empty. Flies buzzed thickly around a pair of lumps on the ground.....a brahmin and a human shaped figure. Blood was spattered on the ground, on the cart, everywhere...
Jack spit. "Fucking raider slime...." he racked a pair of shells into his shotgun and looked at the tracks. After a long moment of contemplation, he made the sign of the cross over the corpse and spit again.
"Happened in the past day, Zeer....they're still out there."
The tribal grunted. "Run off, more likely....still, we will be cautious." The big mans voice trailed off into a basso grumbling, and he prodded the brahmin forward, towards the city on the horizon, with Jack following.
Long minutes later, a single slender form peeped over the rocks. The gangly raider put his pistol away and smiled.....Red would pay well for another caravan to hit...
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Gareth, stop making fun of me...
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Sir_Funkalot wrote:Yes, I thought your part was good Pyro.
But didn't you say Rayen killed Diestler? And then he was alive again, and also I wonder how Rayen managed to get inside Diestlers place...
No Rayen killed the warehouse owner guy, wich owned the wagon and stuff. Diestler was shot by a mystery guy [the white-haired man or someone else...you choose] and survived with a bullet-proof jacket.
I left some parts open for you to play around with, or you could just ignore them....wichever
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Okay, then I get it.
Arch you're next I suppose...
Arch you're next I suppose...
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I call upon the role of Major plot twist combined with 4 pages MUAHAHHAAH!
Chapter 6
The wagon slowed as it reached a blockade in a narrow canyon.
“I have a bad feeling about this� Rayen said looking around nervously. There was a faint whistle like that of a mortar descending. Looking up Rayen Saw pure dark clouds and saw a faint white vapour trail emanating from a rock. The vapour trail began its descent.
“Shit!� Rayen yelled jumping out of the wagon and scrambling away. The vapour trail landed in the wagon and a faint hissing was heard. A shattering blast was heard from behind him and the gust of wind blew him off his feet. Rayen turned around to face the sky watching burning pieces of shrapnel descend. Launching himself up with his arms a burning wheel landed in the location he was just a couple of seconds ago. Rayen closed his eyes and breathed a short sigh of relief as the shrapnel stopped raining. The peace however was short lived as bullet hole appeared in the ground beneath him. Rayen opened his eyes quickly and scanned the area. No one was there, Rayen looked up onto the ledges of the canyon… nothing he thought, and as he looked he saw a faint flicker in the corner of his eye it was on the other side of the barricade. A small cave could be seen at the end of the canyon.
“Got you now you bastard� he mumbled and began running over the barricade. Even weather can have theatrical taste. It began raining “Just perfect� Rayen muttered angrily, normally he would not mind rain but under the circumstances it was more of a hassle then a blessing. Rayen began running towards the man with the rifle. The man was wearing a coat similar to his own. There was the faint out line of a muscular body underneath. The sniper dropped the rifle and raised his hands. Rayen whipped out one of his berretta pointed at the man who bowed his head
“Never have I seen a man ready to surrender so quickly� Rayen commented as he neared the man “Oh well� Rayen said “prepare to be shot� the cloaked man chuckled and raised his head. Rayen stopped in the act of pulling the trigger
“ You wouldn’t shoot your brother now would you Rayen?� the man asked and Rayen shot at his feet and the man jumped away with fright “What the hell did you do that for?� he asked the soaking Rayen
“Damn it. Mushido� Rayen said in disgust putting the pistol away “Why the hell are you here?� he asked him “Your supposed to be pulling highway patrol for hitting on the Lt. Commanders daughter� he asked him angrily
“Your not pleased to see me? I’m crushed� he said smiling at him, Rayen moved like a blur and lifted his brother up with ease smashing him against the wall
“Answer the question Mushido� Rayen said between clenched teeth
“Father sent me here to give you some back up.� Mushido said quickly “He pulled me off patrol for me to give you this� he told him reaching into his pockets and handing a key “Its to the Highwayman around the corner� he motioned with hi head and dropped the keys to the ground. Rayen scowled at his brother “I’m also supposed to go with you� Rayens scowl became positively black and Mushido quailed away from the scowl. Rayens face brightened considerably and he put his brother down and picked up the keys.
“Get your things,� he said, “When we get back you and I are going to have a talk,� he said darkly as his brother gathered up the things hurriedly and went around the corner. Rayen followed him and saw his brother dump all his things into the trunk of a topless highwayman and jump into the drivers seat with a hopeful expression. Rayen sighed and threw him the keys. The young man caught with ease and started up the car “You can drive for a couple of hours� Rayen said as he opened the boot. Inside were five Uzi’s and one assault rifle. Rayen took two. Slamming the trunks lid down and throwing one of the Uzi’s in the back seat and jabbed the other into the fold of the coat. He jumped into the drivers seat.
“Did you see any other wagons go past here?� he asked Mushido
“Yeah it was heading towards the old warehouse about two miles away. In it was the white haired man your chasing, a young girl that was about twenty and an unconscious man.�
“How long ago was it?� Rayen asked him and Mushido paused pursing his lips speculatively
“Couldn’t have been more than twenty hours ago,� he told him
“Think we could catch up with them?� Rayen asked with a viscous grin
“Why don’t we find out?� his brothers grin was the same as Rayens as he planted his foot on the accelerator. Rayen leaned back against the chair “Try no to crash it this time, eh?� he asked his brother
“That was a fluke the accelerator got stuck� his brother protested
“Still a crash is a crash� Rayen commented closing his eyes. His eyes opened suddenly “What do you do to his daughter to piss the Lt. Commander off?�
“His daughter didn’t mind it was her brother � Mushido coughed nervously “Do you mind if we don’t talk about that?� he asked a trifle embarrassed. Rayen laughed and closed his eyes again feeling the wind and the rain against his cheeks.
Rayen awoke abruptly to the gigantic pull of a power slide. They were almost on the edge of a cliff.
�That was close� his brother exclaimed “But I think I’m getting the hang of it� he grinned at his brother
“Mushido the warehouse is over there� he told his brother pointing to the distant object “why are we over here?� he asked him Rayen could see that his brother didn’t want to answer the question “Never mind� he said get in the back seat� he told him. Mushido looked like he was going to argue but instead he scrambled into the back. Rayen sidled over to the wheel and reversed out of the proximity of the cliff and headed towards the warehouse. It took them about five minutes to reach the warehouse. By now it was hailing and both Rayen and Mushido were thankful that it hided the sound of the engine.
“Mushido you are going to stay here!� Rayen told him in a voice that said there was no disobedience. Mushidos’ face looked sullen “Keep the engine warm I may need to leave in a hurry� he said and drifted into the darkness “Ill shoot my Beretta three times if I need you� his voice echoed
The tracks were of the kind of those that were just made. The lights were on and he could here the voices clearly.
“I tell you I cant get it to work nothing will� a drowsy voice said “Its physically impossible� Rayen smiled and drew back his hood. It was pointless in trying to find out the colour of the hair in the dark. Searching the
wall, Rayen finally found the door handle turning it slowly.
“Leave him alone he’s done everything possible� Sarah objected and he clearly heard the sound of a slap
“Stupid Girl� the man said and a crack was heard “your lucky your still alive� the man told her
“You just wait someone will catch you� Sarah told him and there was the sound of a struggle. Then the blunt roar of an engine
“No one will ever catch me,� he told her “I’ve evaded the best for years� he laughed evilly “Even Rayen� he spat. Silently Rayen opened the door and walked in
“Yes you may have avoided me for years haven’t you� Rayen said aloud and the man spun around
“Well if it isn’t Craven?� he asked “Still as persistent as ever?� he looked at Rayens’ hair it was pure white like the man he was addressing “Not hiding your birthright this time are you?� the man asked pushing Sarah away and drew a sword. The sword was a dark-bladed Katana with a blue Pommel
“The final confrontation shouldn’t hide anything Logar� Rayen stated drawing his one broadsword that was the same colour as his opponents. Rayen wielded it with one hand as if it weighed nothing at all.
“I see everybody is here,� a cloaked figure said from the shadows and pulling back his hood also having white hair “Long time now see Rayen� he said withdrawing a bastard sword that was yet again the same as the others “I had such hopes for you when you dropped out of the academy� it said nonchalantly “But you still had the stubborn streak and rejoined� the man sighed “Us three could have had the world Rayen there’s still a chance to join us, interested?� the man asked him
“Sorry Arken� Rayen shook his head “I lost all respect for you, when you tried and stopped me from killing him the last time� he said motioning to Logar
“Logar get out of here� Arken commanded him
“No� Logar rebelled “This is as much my fight as it is yours� he snarled at Arken.
“Do it.� Arken said and Logar yelled in pain “Move� he commanded of the sullen Logar who put his sword away and eyed Sarah and Jiwin evilly
“What should I do with them?� Logar asked his companion who just whistled. Rayen heard the loading of pistols and such. Looking up there were about fifty men on the rafters. The men jumped around Jiwin and Sarah “If he makes one move towards them they die� Logar said as the men landed.
“Rayen defend yourself! Arken commanded
Rayen turned to meet his charge. Their swords met with a hollow clangs and a flash of sparks. They struck again both at the same time and the flash of sparks once again greeted the air as the swords struck each other with their steely bite. The duel continued for a brief moment and then it resumed. The on-lookers were amazed from the ferocity of the fight. Then after a mutual consent they both sheathed their swords and caught their breath
“Your swings don’t seem as crisp as they were ten years ago Rayen� Arken commented huffing with lack of air
“Yours have lagged behind somewhat as well� he replied. “Shall we resume?� Rayen asked the man drawing his sword yet again the man nodded and drew his sword also and the fight resumed he was in the middle of a stroke when he sensed someone behind him. Instead of finishing the stroke Rayen plunged his sword into the ground and flipped himself over Arken. He felt the gush of air as a sword passed through where he had been. And he was headed straight for a wall. Rayen landed against the wall and launched off as he touched it for just a second.
“I thought this fight was supposed to be one on one?� Rayen asked Arken who was staring miserably at Logar
“It was but someone interfered� Arken replied sheathing his sword, Rayen sheathed his also “Now the fact of what I’m going to do him now� he whipped out his berretta and fired three shots designed to miss then put it away just a quickly “Again?� Arken asked his competitor who drew his sword and nodded. Arken whipped the sword out of its sheath ran towards his opponent. Rayen also began running and they leaped at the same time there swords both slicing against the side of their torsos. Rayen nodded and unleashed an attack that would have confused most people with the ferocity of it. Arken deflected all the strokes and Arken replied with a combo of his own and Rayen deflected them with the same ease as Arken had his. They both charged again but stopped in mid stride. Only Arken and Rayen could hear the noise of the advancing car. They sheathed their swords on mutual accent and the gang members looked awe struck by this pause expecting them to burst into flames again at any minute. It was then the car came crashing in fully half of the gang members dived out of its way fell to Mushidos and Rayens Uzi. The gangs’ members were half gone as soon as they recognized they were under attack.
“Get the two prisoners� Logar yelled at the troops “Don’t let them escape� But it was too late Rayen and Mushido had already killed or crippled three-quarters of them and the rest fell easily. Arken began to clap
“Well done Rayen� Arken complemented as he finished clapping “I had not suspected that you had someone else with you� he said motioning at Mushido who was locking stares with Logar.
“We could have beaten another fifty� Mushido replied
“Oh really?� Logar asked, “Well lets continue that thought� and tried to whistle he failed miserably
“Mushido, Car Now� Rayen said angrily “You too� he scowled at Sarah and Jiwin who quickly jumped into the back seat
“Look at you walking around� Logar sneered at Mushido “Your some fucking loser aren’t you� Mushido raised the Uzi his smile positively viscous; Rayen then slammed it out of his hands,
“Orders are for him to be alive idiot,� he snarled at his brother and Logars grin was smug and his eyes glazed over as Arkens Hand was brought firmly down on his head
“Logar?� Arken asked him “No talking from now on� he commanded his unconscious companion and whistled “We will meet again Rayen� Arken told him as the doors were slammed open and men trudged in to form a line behind him. One soldier Picked up Logar and slung him over his soldier “Oh by the way you have ten seconds before my men open fire. Rayen spat and hurled a grenade at the ground and jumped in the car
“Go, go, go!� he yelled as he jumped into the passengers’ seat and Mushido Jammed it into reverse and wheeled away. Soldiers that were cautiously looking around the corner, they fled around the corners as the highwayman roared past a flash of light and a giant burst of sound emanated from the building.
“Flash bang?� Mushido asked Rayen who just nodded and grinned viciously. There was complete and utter silence after then until…
A bullet penetrated the glass in front of Rayen, and he looked behind him
“Damn it� Rayen said and climbed into the back seat
“What is it?� Mushido asked who was swerving left and right to get past the offending rocks and vegetation.
“Arken came prepared for this somehow� he swore. “They have Hum-vees� Rayen replied
“Can we out run them?� Mushido asked swearing vehemently
“Not likely� Rayen said drawing a magnum from his shoe and firing it at the car. He shot the tire of one and it flew off into a rock where exploded in a gigantic fireball.
“Five more� Rayen fired at another vehicles tire, there was dull ping “No-way those could have been standard issue� he commented and pulled a longer bullet and jammed it into the magnum. “This will fix the problem� he chuckled and fired it into the vehicles tire. There was a horrifying explosion and the vehicle in front swerved on its side and the other four tried to break, but they were too late. The nearest car crashed into the first. Jumping over the flaming wreak and it flipped over in the air. The other three were not so lucky however. They all crashed into the wreak catching fire immediately. After driving for another minute, Three faint explosions were heard and
“Where to now Rayen?� Mushido asked his brother
“To the HQ� he winced as he turned clutching his elbow “Do we have any pliers?� he asked Mushido
“Pliers?� his brother asked him
“Or tweezers something to get this damn bullet out� he said between clenched teeth
“There should be a first aid kit underneath the back seat,� he told his brother swerving out of the way of a tree “We should get there by tomorrow morning…. Or is it this morning?� he asked Rayen
“I wouldn’t know I’ve lost track of the hours� Rayen replied He looked at the sky speculatively and then looked at his brother who was bent drowsily over the wheel “Mushido I’ll drive from here� he told his brother who pulled over so they could swap seats “Why don’t you try and get some sleep?� he asked as he began driving
“I can go on as long as you can Rayen� Mushido objected
“Mushido don’t make me act like father� he warned his brother
“Fine, fine I’ll get some sleep� Mushido gave in and laid back into the seat and closed his eyes
It was nearing morning the rain had stopped and the sun was gradually drying the landscape. Rayen stifled a yawn and heard the sounds of someone waking up. Momentarily looking behind him, Sarah stretched her arms and yawned
“Where are we?� she asked her brother who just snored his reply
“Were about a mile from the FBI HQ� Rayen said over his shoulder
“Thank you Rayen� she told him throwing her arms around his neck nd kissing him. Rayen whitened visibly but a faint flush could be seen barely. He looked at his shoulder which he could barely move as it is “Oh sorry� she told him taking her arms away from the wound
“Could you please get the First aid box from under your seat?� he asked her stopping he car
“Sure� she said happily and looked under the seat pulling the box out into the open
“Could you get the tweezers out?� he asked her and she grudgingly gave him a large pair of tweezers. Rayen ripped it out of the plastic covering with his teeth. Rayen stopped he car and jabbed it into wound he grunted with pain while probing the wound. His breathing pace increased and he yanked the tweezers out and in between the pincers was a small bullet the wound was breeding freely now a white liquid was intermingled with the blood. “Damn� Rayen exclaimed looking at the white liquid with distaste. “Its got infected,� he cursed. Sarah’s’ face was pure white as she saw what was done to he wound. Rayen nudged his brother who woke up with a dagger in his hand. He looked around and saw nothing but Rayen and Sarah who quailed away from the knife.
“Damn it Rayen� he said putting the knife away “What the hell do you want?�
“You’re driving,� he said getting out of the seat and walking over to the other side
“Why can’t you drive were almost there?� Mushido complained shifting over into the seat and starting the car again “Sorry Rayen� his brother apologized quickly and drove on as soon as Rayen was in the car. The reached the top of the hill and a huge complex of stone loomed down the bottom.
“FBI HQ in all its wonder� Mushido said to his passengers and drove down the hill
“Stop joking Mushido� Rayen said and looked at Sarah’s sleeping brother “Can you wake him up?� he asked
“I can but Jiwin won’t be happy� she warned him and began to shake him
“He’ll be a lot less happier if I have to wake him up� Rayen told her as the car pulled to a stop in front of a check point “Didn’t catch him this time did you Rayen� a brown haired man said as the gate swung open “You caught some other things though� he said looking at the sleepy eyed Jiwin and the awe struck Sarah.
“Spar do me a favour and shut up will you?� Rayen asked the man wearily
“You know the procedures send them over to the decontamination unit then show them to your father.� Spar said and motioned people out of the way
“Yeah� Rayen said and motioned Mushido to continue on Mushido nodded and drove onwards to another checkpoint “We get out here� Rayen told the passengers and opened the door. The others followed suit and they stepped into a booth with many air jets. Mushido motioned to a man on the other side of the glass. The man pushed a button. A horrible smelling substance came of of the jets hitting them like a zephyr.
“Now to the medbay� Rayen sighed “I suspect that the doctor will give me a severe toung lashing about this one� he said pressing his other arm on the wound in his side. Rayen paled visbly and motioned Mushido over
“Make sure they get something to eat and then send them over to fathers office you stay with them there untill I get there� he told his brother and walked off to the left. Mushido mumbled something and led his “guests� over to the cafeteria.
They had been in the waiting room for an hour and Mushido was in a formal uniform pacing up and down. Sarah and Jiwin were renewing bonds and Rayen were nowhere to be seen. There was the squeak of a rusty door and the adjoining chamber opened. Rayen walked out from the door. Rayens torso wound and his arm was in a sling. A breif flicker of annoyance crossed his face and he motioned for Mushido, Jiwin and Sarah to follow him out
“So what did Dad say?� Mushido asked him Rayen grunted his reply and collapsed…
Chapter 6
The wagon slowed as it reached a blockade in a narrow canyon.
“I have a bad feeling about this� Rayen said looking around nervously. There was a faint whistle like that of a mortar descending. Looking up Rayen Saw pure dark clouds and saw a faint white vapour trail emanating from a rock. The vapour trail began its descent.
“Shit!� Rayen yelled jumping out of the wagon and scrambling away. The vapour trail landed in the wagon and a faint hissing was heard. A shattering blast was heard from behind him and the gust of wind blew him off his feet. Rayen turned around to face the sky watching burning pieces of shrapnel descend. Launching himself up with his arms a burning wheel landed in the location he was just a couple of seconds ago. Rayen closed his eyes and breathed a short sigh of relief as the shrapnel stopped raining. The peace however was short lived as bullet hole appeared in the ground beneath him. Rayen opened his eyes quickly and scanned the area. No one was there, Rayen looked up onto the ledges of the canyon… nothing he thought, and as he looked he saw a faint flicker in the corner of his eye it was on the other side of the barricade. A small cave could be seen at the end of the canyon.
“Got you now you bastard� he mumbled and began running over the barricade. Even weather can have theatrical taste. It began raining “Just perfect� Rayen muttered angrily, normally he would not mind rain but under the circumstances it was more of a hassle then a blessing. Rayen began running towards the man with the rifle. The man was wearing a coat similar to his own. There was the faint out line of a muscular body underneath. The sniper dropped the rifle and raised his hands. Rayen whipped out one of his berretta pointed at the man who bowed his head
“Never have I seen a man ready to surrender so quickly� Rayen commented as he neared the man “Oh well� Rayen said “prepare to be shot� the cloaked man chuckled and raised his head. Rayen stopped in the act of pulling the trigger
“ You wouldn’t shoot your brother now would you Rayen?� the man asked and Rayen shot at his feet and the man jumped away with fright “What the hell did you do that for?� he asked the soaking Rayen
“Damn it. Mushido� Rayen said in disgust putting the pistol away “Why the hell are you here?� he asked him “Your supposed to be pulling highway patrol for hitting on the Lt. Commanders daughter� he asked him angrily
“Your not pleased to see me? I’m crushed� he said smiling at him, Rayen moved like a blur and lifted his brother up with ease smashing him against the wall
“Answer the question Mushido� Rayen said between clenched teeth
“Father sent me here to give you some back up.� Mushido said quickly “He pulled me off patrol for me to give you this� he told him reaching into his pockets and handing a key “Its to the Highwayman around the corner� he motioned with hi head and dropped the keys to the ground. Rayen scowled at his brother “I’m also supposed to go with you� Rayens scowl became positively black and Mushido quailed away from the scowl. Rayens face brightened considerably and he put his brother down and picked up the keys.
“Get your things,� he said, “When we get back you and I are going to have a talk,� he said darkly as his brother gathered up the things hurriedly and went around the corner. Rayen followed him and saw his brother dump all his things into the trunk of a topless highwayman and jump into the drivers seat with a hopeful expression. Rayen sighed and threw him the keys. The young man caught with ease and started up the car “You can drive for a couple of hours� Rayen said as he opened the boot. Inside were five Uzi’s and one assault rifle. Rayen took two. Slamming the trunks lid down and throwing one of the Uzi’s in the back seat and jabbed the other into the fold of the coat. He jumped into the drivers seat.
“Did you see any other wagons go past here?� he asked Mushido
“Yeah it was heading towards the old warehouse about two miles away. In it was the white haired man your chasing, a young girl that was about twenty and an unconscious man.�
“How long ago was it?� Rayen asked him and Mushido paused pursing his lips speculatively
“Couldn’t have been more than twenty hours ago,� he told him
“Think we could catch up with them?� Rayen asked with a viscous grin
“Why don’t we find out?� his brothers grin was the same as Rayens as he planted his foot on the accelerator. Rayen leaned back against the chair “Try no to crash it this time, eh?� he asked his brother
“That was a fluke the accelerator got stuck� his brother protested
“Still a crash is a crash� Rayen commented closing his eyes. His eyes opened suddenly “What do you do to his daughter to piss the Lt. Commander off?�
“His daughter didn’t mind it was her brother � Mushido coughed nervously “Do you mind if we don’t talk about that?� he asked a trifle embarrassed. Rayen laughed and closed his eyes again feeling the wind and the rain against his cheeks.
Rayen awoke abruptly to the gigantic pull of a power slide. They were almost on the edge of a cliff.
�That was close� his brother exclaimed “But I think I’m getting the hang of it� he grinned at his brother
“Mushido the warehouse is over there� he told his brother pointing to the distant object “why are we over here?� he asked him Rayen could see that his brother didn’t want to answer the question “Never mind� he said get in the back seat� he told him. Mushido looked like he was going to argue but instead he scrambled into the back. Rayen sidled over to the wheel and reversed out of the proximity of the cliff and headed towards the warehouse. It took them about five minutes to reach the warehouse. By now it was hailing and both Rayen and Mushido were thankful that it hided the sound of the engine.
“Mushido you are going to stay here!� Rayen told him in a voice that said there was no disobedience. Mushidos’ face looked sullen “Keep the engine warm I may need to leave in a hurry� he said and drifted into the darkness “Ill shoot my Beretta three times if I need you� his voice echoed
The tracks were of the kind of those that were just made. The lights were on and he could here the voices clearly.
“I tell you I cant get it to work nothing will� a drowsy voice said “Its physically impossible� Rayen smiled and drew back his hood. It was pointless in trying to find out the colour of the hair in the dark. Searching the
wall, Rayen finally found the door handle turning it slowly.
“Leave him alone he’s done everything possible� Sarah objected and he clearly heard the sound of a slap
“Stupid Girl� the man said and a crack was heard “your lucky your still alive� the man told her
“You just wait someone will catch you� Sarah told him and there was the sound of a struggle. Then the blunt roar of an engine
“No one will ever catch me,� he told her “I’ve evaded the best for years� he laughed evilly “Even Rayen� he spat. Silently Rayen opened the door and walked in
“Yes you may have avoided me for years haven’t you� Rayen said aloud and the man spun around
“Well if it isn’t Craven?� he asked “Still as persistent as ever?� he looked at Rayens’ hair it was pure white like the man he was addressing “Not hiding your birthright this time are you?� the man asked pushing Sarah away and drew a sword. The sword was a dark-bladed Katana with a blue Pommel
“The final confrontation shouldn’t hide anything Logar� Rayen stated drawing his one broadsword that was the same colour as his opponents. Rayen wielded it with one hand as if it weighed nothing at all.
“I see everybody is here,� a cloaked figure said from the shadows and pulling back his hood also having white hair “Long time now see Rayen� he said withdrawing a bastard sword that was yet again the same as the others “I had such hopes for you when you dropped out of the academy� it said nonchalantly “But you still had the stubborn streak and rejoined� the man sighed “Us three could have had the world Rayen there’s still a chance to join us, interested?� the man asked him
“Sorry Arken� Rayen shook his head “I lost all respect for you, when you tried and stopped me from killing him the last time� he said motioning to Logar
“Logar get out of here� Arken commanded him
“No� Logar rebelled “This is as much my fight as it is yours� he snarled at Arken.
“Do it.� Arken said and Logar yelled in pain “Move� he commanded of the sullen Logar who put his sword away and eyed Sarah and Jiwin evilly
“What should I do with them?� Logar asked his companion who just whistled. Rayen heard the loading of pistols and such. Looking up there were about fifty men on the rafters. The men jumped around Jiwin and Sarah “If he makes one move towards them they die� Logar said as the men landed.
“Rayen defend yourself! Arken commanded
Rayen turned to meet his charge. Their swords met with a hollow clangs and a flash of sparks. They struck again both at the same time and the flash of sparks once again greeted the air as the swords struck each other with their steely bite. The duel continued for a brief moment and then it resumed. The on-lookers were amazed from the ferocity of the fight. Then after a mutual consent they both sheathed their swords and caught their breath
“Your swings don’t seem as crisp as they were ten years ago Rayen� Arken commented huffing with lack of air
“Yours have lagged behind somewhat as well� he replied. “Shall we resume?� Rayen asked the man drawing his sword yet again the man nodded and drew his sword also and the fight resumed he was in the middle of a stroke when he sensed someone behind him. Instead of finishing the stroke Rayen plunged his sword into the ground and flipped himself over Arken. He felt the gush of air as a sword passed through where he had been. And he was headed straight for a wall. Rayen landed against the wall and launched off as he touched it for just a second.
“I thought this fight was supposed to be one on one?� Rayen asked Arken who was staring miserably at Logar
“It was but someone interfered� Arken replied sheathing his sword, Rayen sheathed his also “Now the fact of what I’m going to do him now� he whipped out his berretta and fired three shots designed to miss then put it away just a quickly “Again?� Arken asked his competitor who drew his sword and nodded. Arken whipped the sword out of its sheath ran towards his opponent. Rayen also began running and they leaped at the same time there swords both slicing against the side of their torsos. Rayen nodded and unleashed an attack that would have confused most people with the ferocity of it. Arken deflected all the strokes and Arken replied with a combo of his own and Rayen deflected them with the same ease as Arken had his. They both charged again but stopped in mid stride. Only Arken and Rayen could hear the noise of the advancing car. They sheathed their swords on mutual accent and the gang members looked awe struck by this pause expecting them to burst into flames again at any minute. It was then the car came crashing in fully half of the gang members dived out of its way fell to Mushidos and Rayens Uzi. The gangs’ members were half gone as soon as they recognized they were under attack.
“Get the two prisoners� Logar yelled at the troops “Don’t let them escape� But it was too late Rayen and Mushido had already killed or crippled three-quarters of them and the rest fell easily. Arken began to clap
“Well done Rayen� Arken complemented as he finished clapping “I had not suspected that you had someone else with you� he said motioning at Mushido who was locking stares with Logar.
“We could have beaten another fifty� Mushido replied
“Oh really?� Logar asked, “Well lets continue that thought� and tried to whistle he failed miserably
“Mushido, Car Now� Rayen said angrily “You too� he scowled at Sarah and Jiwin who quickly jumped into the back seat
“Look at you walking around� Logar sneered at Mushido “Your some fucking loser aren’t you� Mushido raised the Uzi his smile positively viscous; Rayen then slammed it out of his hands,
“Orders are for him to be alive idiot,� he snarled at his brother and Logars grin was smug and his eyes glazed over as Arkens Hand was brought firmly down on his head
“Logar?� Arken asked him “No talking from now on� he commanded his unconscious companion and whistled “We will meet again Rayen� Arken told him as the doors were slammed open and men trudged in to form a line behind him. One soldier Picked up Logar and slung him over his soldier “Oh by the way you have ten seconds before my men open fire. Rayen spat and hurled a grenade at the ground and jumped in the car
“Go, go, go!� he yelled as he jumped into the passengers’ seat and Mushido Jammed it into reverse and wheeled away. Soldiers that were cautiously looking around the corner, they fled around the corners as the highwayman roared past a flash of light and a giant burst of sound emanated from the building.
“Flash bang?� Mushido asked Rayen who just nodded and grinned viciously. There was complete and utter silence after then until…
A bullet penetrated the glass in front of Rayen, and he looked behind him
“Damn it� Rayen said and climbed into the back seat
“What is it?� Mushido asked who was swerving left and right to get past the offending rocks and vegetation.
“Arken came prepared for this somehow� he swore. “They have Hum-vees� Rayen replied
“Can we out run them?� Mushido asked swearing vehemently
“Not likely� Rayen said drawing a magnum from his shoe and firing it at the car. He shot the tire of one and it flew off into a rock where exploded in a gigantic fireball.
“Five more� Rayen fired at another vehicles tire, there was dull ping “No-way those could have been standard issue� he commented and pulled a longer bullet and jammed it into the magnum. “This will fix the problem� he chuckled and fired it into the vehicles tire. There was a horrifying explosion and the vehicle in front swerved on its side and the other four tried to break, but they were too late. The nearest car crashed into the first. Jumping over the flaming wreak and it flipped over in the air. The other three were not so lucky however. They all crashed into the wreak catching fire immediately. After driving for another minute, Three faint explosions were heard and
“Where to now Rayen?� Mushido asked his brother
“To the HQ� he winced as he turned clutching his elbow “Do we have any pliers?� he asked Mushido
“Pliers?� his brother asked him
“Or tweezers something to get this damn bullet out� he said between clenched teeth
“There should be a first aid kit underneath the back seat,� he told his brother swerving out of the way of a tree “We should get there by tomorrow morning…. Or is it this morning?� he asked Rayen
“I wouldn’t know I’ve lost track of the hours� Rayen replied He looked at the sky speculatively and then looked at his brother who was bent drowsily over the wheel “Mushido I’ll drive from here� he told his brother who pulled over so they could swap seats “Why don’t you try and get some sleep?� he asked as he began driving
“I can go on as long as you can Rayen� Mushido objected
“Mushido don’t make me act like father� he warned his brother
“Fine, fine I’ll get some sleep� Mushido gave in and laid back into the seat and closed his eyes
It was nearing morning the rain had stopped and the sun was gradually drying the landscape. Rayen stifled a yawn and heard the sounds of someone waking up. Momentarily looking behind him, Sarah stretched her arms and yawned
“Where are we?� she asked her brother who just snored his reply
“Were about a mile from the FBI HQ� Rayen said over his shoulder
“Thank you Rayen� she told him throwing her arms around his neck nd kissing him. Rayen whitened visibly but a faint flush could be seen barely. He looked at his shoulder which he could barely move as it is “Oh sorry� she told him taking her arms away from the wound
“Could you please get the First aid box from under your seat?� he asked her stopping he car
“Sure� she said happily and looked under the seat pulling the box out into the open
“Could you get the tweezers out?� he asked her and she grudgingly gave him a large pair of tweezers. Rayen ripped it out of the plastic covering with his teeth. Rayen stopped he car and jabbed it into wound he grunted with pain while probing the wound. His breathing pace increased and he yanked the tweezers out and in between the pincers was a small bullet the wound was breeding freely now a white liquid was intermingled with the blood. “Damn� Rayen exclaimed looking at the white liquid with distaste. “Its got infected,� he cursed. Sarah’s’ face was pure white as she saw what was done to he wound. Rayen nudged his brother who woke up with a dagger in his hand. He looked around and saw nothing but Rayen and Sarah who quailed away from the knife.
“Damn it Rayen� he said putting the knife away “What the hell do you want?�
“You’re driving,� he said getting out of the seat and walking over to the other side
“Why can’t you drive were almost there?� Mushido complained shifting over into the seat and starting the car again “Sorry Rayen� his brother apologized quickly and drove on as soon as Rayen was in the car. The reached the top of the hill and a huge complex of stone loomed down the bottom.
“FBI HQ in all its wonder� Mushido said to his passengers and drove down the hill
“Stop joking Mushido� Rayen said and looked at Sarah’s sleeping brother “Can you wake him up?� he asked
“I can but Jiwin won’t be happy� she warned him and began to shake him
“He’ll be a lot less happier if I have to wake him up� Rayen told her as the car pulled to a stop in front of a check point “Didn’t catch him this time did you Rayen� a brown haired man said as the gate swung open “You caught some other things though� he said looking at the sleepy eyed Jiwin and the awe struck Sarah.
“Spar do me a favour and shut up will you?� Rayen asked the man wearily
“You know the procedures send them over to the decontamination unit then show them to your father.� Spar said and motioned people out of the way
“Yeah� Rayen said and motioned Mushido to continue on Mushido nodded and drove onwards to another checkpoint “We get out here� Rayen told the passengers and opened the door. The others followed suit and they stepped into a booth with many air jets. Mushido motioned to a man on the other side of the glass. The man pushed a button. A horrible smelling substance came of of the jets hitting them like a zephyr.
“Now to the medbay� Rayen sighed “I suspect that the doctor will give me a severe toung lashing about this one� he said pressing his other arm on the wound in his side. Rayen paled visbly and motioned Mushido over
“Make sure they get something to eat and then send them over to fathers office you stay with them there untill I get there� he told his brother and walked off to the left. Mushido mumbled something and led his “guests� over to the cafeteria.
They had been in the waiting room for an hour and Mushido was in a formal uniform pacing up and down. Sarah and Jiwin were renewing bonds and Rayen were nowhere to be seen. There was the squeak of a rusty door and the adjoining chamber opened. Rayen walked out from the door. Rayens torso wound and his arm was in a sling. A breif flicker of annoyance crossed his face and he motioned for Mushido, Jiwin and Sarah to follow him out
“So what did Dad say?� Mushido asked him Rayen grunted his reply and collapsed…
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Okay, then I'm next.
I'll have chapter 7 wrote and posted in up to 13 hours I think, as I have to go to school first...
I'll have chapter 7 wrote and posted in up to 13 hours I think, as I have to go to school first...
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I didn't have time to make chapter 7 yet, and I will not have access to any computer until tomorrow. Section8, could you write chapter 7, then I'll write chapter 8 instead?
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Sorry to critisize but you changed the story slightly
First Diestler wasnt taken by the white haired man, he left him for dead and he woke up and saw tracks pulling away somewhere
Who's craven?
Diestler isnt called Jiwin
Where did Rayen get his katana from?
What about Zeer and jack [who did'nt seem to have anything to do with the story but...]
Ill do chapter 7 if section8 doesnt do it in hte next 3 hours, failing that I'll do chapter 9
Sorry to critisize but you changed the story slightly
First Diestler wasnt taken by the white haired man, he left him for dead and he woke up and saw tracks pulling away somewhere
Who's craven?
craven=logar?“Well if it isn’t Craven?” he asked “Still as persistent as ever?”
Diestler isnt called Jiwin
Where did Rayen get his katana from?
What about Zeer and jack [who did'nt seem to have anything to do with the story but...]
Ill do chapter 7 if section8 doesnt do it in hte next 3 hours, failing that I'll do chapter 9
