Duck and Cover

can some-one else do the paragraph my uncle has just died...

You've got my permission to post my bits. Credit/No credit, doesn't really bother me. I'm just here to have some fun and flex some creative muscles.

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Arch: That's some pretty terrible news. I'll run with the next Chapter if you'd like.

Thanks i'll aprecciate that

Are you making chapter 11 at the time Section8?
Should I post the story on my site now or should I wait?
What will the name be of the fiction? Or is it just: "Round Robin w/o real name by some authors..."?

sorry about your uncle arch

I think we should call it 'The hunt' because that's more or less what its about.
Jack and Zeer hunting Rayden hunting the white haired man and the other 2 people [can.t remember names] hunting for water then sarah [possibley]

and have the authors something like ASPES [our user name initials]...or think of something catchier. Arch funkpyrla 8 ?

Or we can call ourselves:
The ASTM
Ancient
Story
Tellers of
Montciel

Ugh. I'm bogged down with work, and I'm not in a creative mindset. I'll just take my turn whenever there's another opportunity...

The ASTM? *throws idea wround like tennis ball* Don't really care what we call ourselve and now im ready to type again i've been to my uncles funeral and shall be writing again in about a day or two

Then we'll just let Arch write the next chapter, as I'll have to work on The Arena Comic...

Your too kind

Emm... a little question:

It's been days since the last chapter, who's writing the next chapter?
Section8? Arch?

Look, Follower found this topic - bad news indeed. Like some bore, I must say my word everywhere... Can I join party? My English is poor but I'll try... I promise ... Well, if there is no place - ok, I'll understand. Too many people will write story not so fast...

You'll have to wait and see what the others think, I've got no problem with it, as long as you've read the whole story...

Sorry i'll do the next chapter soon i have just been overloaded with projects for school that i need to pass. It will be done in about two days and i've got no problem leave no one out more variety

Two days? I'll hardly notice since I'm beggining to get computer game addicted again...
I can probably wait that long... take your time.
Then I'll write the chapter after that (13 I think)...

This is as much as i could do

Rayen had been waiting in bed for three days with Sarah by his side and frankly he would rather be up and about. One the beginning of the fourth day he has had enough.
“That’s it I’m out of here,� he said angrily throwing off the sheets
“Put some clothes on� Sarah said turning her back resolutely
“Where are they?� he said looking around
“In the foot locker at the end of the bed� she sighed as Rayen ripped open the locker and hastily got into his pants.
“You can look now,� he said to her trying to get his shirt on. She turned around and saw him
“Oh let me help,� she told him walking over to help him.
“I can do it� Rayen protested from somewhere in his shirt. Pulling it down over his head he saw Sarah straining hold his cloak up for him
“Why is it so heavy� she asked him nearly falling over, Rayen to answer her question patted the cloak and there was a metal clink.
“Armor and Kevlar costs a lot of money and physical strain but there’s no better protection� he said shrugging on his cloak. “How do I look?� he asked turing to face her
“they wouldn’t give you a seond glance� she said to him confidently
“Good� he said “Now please don’t tell anyone I’m gone� he begged of her.
“That won’t be a problem� she told him “because I’ll be going with you,� she said to him quite calmly
“What?� Rayen asked his voice deadly cold
“I’m going with you�
“I forbid it� he said to her “its too dangerous
“If I scream everyone will know whats happening and you won’t get anywhere� Rayens face struggled to keep calm “There’s a reason I suppose?� he asked her
“Yes� she told him
“Will you tell me it?� he asked her
“No� she said coldly thouhg Rayen guessed it had something to do with him
“Fine� he gave in and Sarahs face looked exultant. “Now follow me,� he said striding out he door

Rayen twisted and turned so much Sarah found it hard to keep up but he finally stopped in front of a door. Rayen jiggled the handle and it didn’t open, he then punched the handle once and it opened with a sickining howl of metal bending. Sarah looked at Rayen and shaked her head as he opened to reveal a passage
“Why are we going into the middle of the compound?� She asked him
“Old entrance� Rayen shrugged “It gets you past the walls into the garage� Lighting a candle on the passages
“Useful� Sarah comented “Who found it?�
“A group of students that used it to get out past curvew� he said walking down the open passage
“What for?� she asked him puzzled following him
“What else is on a students mind apart from sex and alchohol?� Rayen said nonchalantly
“How did you learn about this?� she asked him
“I was a student once too,� he told her.
“I pity the teachers,� she said quietly Rayen looked back with a grin. They walked for perhaps ten minutes then they reached the edge of the tunnel.
“Wait here� he told her and slinked out of the opening before she could object. There was a muffled sound and then he returned
“When I get back I’ll talk to my dad about security in the garage there getting just a bit slack� he mumbled to her Come on� he said to her curtly. The light pained Sarahs eyes but she followed Rayen closely. Rayen looked at the cars assorted in the garage. He pointed to car and headed towards it. He passed a rack of keys and took one with the number nine enscribed upon it. The car they were heading towards was exactly the same one Rayen, Sarah, Jiwin and Mushido had arrived in. Rayen opened the door for Sarah and then went round to the drivers side.
“Hold on� he said as Sarah got in and closed the door behind her “Things are about to get bumpy� he said starting the engine. “Hope dad forives me for this� he said planting the pedal and bursting through the garage door past a startled soldier. The compounds gate was closed
“Open the gate� Rayen yelled to the startled guards. The gate opened slowly while soldiers dived left and right to get oout of the cars path It was lucky for the gate guards that they opened the gate before the car whirled past.

Rayen drove on for the rest of the day until they reached the abandoned shed. The carnage had been moved slightly by scavengers and a sickly smell surrounded the area. Sarah gagged as she came into contact with the smell and the site from last weeks carnage. Rayen jumped out and looked at the ground. There was a faint track of a group of people moving in a general direction among them he saw the familiar boot print of Mushidos' standard issue boots.
“Well we know where Mushido and your brother is going,� he said to Sarah getting back into the car.
“Where?� she asked her face was pale and her voice was sickly. Rayen pointed north-east
“Trust my brother to find away to water. There’s a lake about an hours drive from I think we should stay there for the night.� He said to her starting the car
“Any place is better than here� Sarah told him Rayen nodded his head in acknowledgment and steered the car in that direction. They drove on for about another two hours untill they spotted the crystal blue shores of the lake.
“At least you look healthier now� Rayen commented as he stopped the car “You were pale as a sheet back there� he said
“It smelt so horrible� she told him her face blanching
“Tell you what� Rayen said to her “I’ll start making the encampment and you go do something relaxing� he said to her soothingly. He knew what it was like seeing the carnage and not being able to take it. Sarah gave him a grateful look and began to unbutton her shirt. Rayen whirled around quickly his face red with embarresment
“Ummm what are you doing?� he asked her
“I’m going to have a bath she told him� her hand resting lightly on his shoulder “Don’t peek� she told him. Rayen drew in a deep breath “Too much� she said cheekily. Her hand then left his shoulder and then a moment later there was splashing. “Oh stop being so stuffy you can look now� she told him, Rayen cautiously turned his head and saw Sarah neck down in the lake.
“Now why don’t you come in and join me?� she teased him.



Sorry I just had to add some more romance

Hey, where can I find this story, anyway? I want to read it. Title?

The story is here, just check earlier posts, but it'll be added to my site when finished...

The title is until or if we find something better just 'The Hunt'...

By the way, the title "the hunt" is good enough. Short title, like this, can contain big theme - and big titles are distracting the attention from main idea... You have to describe this title... or it will look strange - I hope you catch my idea... I can't explain it more clearly...

I get your point. though I prefer to name a fan-fic after something you find in the story, not the theme. Seem's it's up to me to do the next chapter... it'll be ready in some days probably...