Endless March through the Wastes
Posted: Mon Jul 01, 2002 12:33 am
Hi, guys I am back... I've dealt with my problems much sooner than I hoped.
Anyway, my plans have changed and now I can spent some more time at fan fic... You know, it consumes all my time. I think about it every day - new story tortures me as hot iron needle in my ass. I need to post in here to stop it. Of course, only few will read it - it really sucks to read this text from the screen, but it suits me fine - I am so shy person
As I said, new story is awaits... I am ready for some serious lonf stuff. I shut down all my recent activity and now concentrate at this story. New chapter every one-two days... Surely I can use one's help. If you want you can join me. It's a great chance stuff, believe me. I write it no because I want to be great writer or smt like that - it is childhish - it is sily great to feel such ispiration. You should try yourself... And of course, you will hear no angry cries here. Post whatever you want... I am not prof and my English is bad. So there will be no critics...
I begin my story in a two days. I need to reconsider several things and wait for your responses. Anyway, even if you don't want to join it your chance to express your ideas, to add your character - after the begining of the story you can join too, but you'll have to use created main persons. And you know - you can add your thoughts about the development of story even after the story will begin. I will read it all.
Ok, it's time to show my thoughts - I have no title for my story yet and you can advise me smt... The story will be half-serious. I am not so good with jokes, but I'll try. I will write it about month. I hope I'll have enough time. This is real problem.
Storyline - group of losers, drunkards, druggies are travelling through the wastes. They solve many problems, they have many advantures... most of them even don't know what happens. Their luck can be 10. Some of them has such perks, as jinxed or bloody mess(I admit that I stole it from Sykotic. Sorry pal). Anyway, they survive all harshes of the wastes... There can be one hero, who saves their sorry asses, but only one... There can be several bad guys, who are hunting after them... They are following the great chosen one, they heard about, but often are mistaken as chosen one himself or some advanturers... They had to take some quests they solve or run away...
Timeline - all happens after the several months after the begining of FO 2. Chosen one is still somewhere out there, saving the world. But tales about him are roaming the wastes. That bunch of losers want to join him in his quest in search for honour and glory(and money and chics...). So they met each other in Den, full of his admirers, and decided to follow him.
Style and other stuff - if you want to join - feel free to do it. Style is not important. It will be good enough to understand what do you want to say and the storyline shouldn't be different from the main plot. You can create your own person, do with them all whatever you want... Try to write enough so it looked like long story, but it doesn't matter very much. One request - you must finish what you want to begin. Even if it means the death of your hero... :twisted:
Ok, once again. I am waiting for two days and begin the story. I surely can use one's help...
PROLOGUE
Chosen one left his village slowly. Hot sun was behind him. The great bridge to the wastes greeted him grimly. Cold air from the canyon below chill his blood... His soul was cold too. He left all he hold dear - his friends, his family, his people - all depended from he. Chosen one looked at his village last time and left it. Cold wind was the only one who said good bye to him... as it was decades ago with his ancestor. Lone figure went by the wastes, empy and emtionless. Chosen one felt nothing, but only chill wind. Blue suit didn't protect from it. It was becming colder every minute... suddenly chosen one heard the quiet lonely song. It was heard in wind itself, their words were sounded in one's heart. It was a song of the Hakunin, their tribe's shaman. Chosen one looked at the west, where he left his people, smiled quietly, I continued his journeys... He knew that he would be able to do it than...
Song of the Shaman.
From the sands of the Wastes,
From the depthes of the Vaults,
You were summoned above
To take quest with no faults.
In your travel below
Many dangers were found,
But by your mind and fists
It were taken care about.
Many legends were told,
Many tales were found,
But the one will remain
The untold and profound.
Many journeys ahead,
Many travels below.
From the end to the end,
And the death is reward...
... A hero you were called,
Your exploits shine as sun.
But darkness wails ahead
And the way is full of blood.
You will take a rest one day
And will leave a road ahead.
But people will never forget
And new heroes will rise instead...



As I said, new story is awaits... I am ready for some serious lonf stuff. I shut down all my recent activity and now concentrate at this story. New chapter every one-two days... Surely I can use one's help. If you want you can join me. It's a great chance stuff, believe me. I write it no because I want to be great writer or smt like that - it is childhish - it is sily great to feel such ispiration. You should try yourself... And of course, you will hear no angry cries here. Post whatever you want... I am not prof and my English is bad. So there will be no critics...
I begin my story in a two days. I need to reconsider several things and wait for your responses. Anyway, even if you don't want to join it your chance to express your ideas, to add your character - after the begining of the story you can join too, but you'll have to use created main persons. And you know - you can add your thoughts about the development of story even after the story will begin. I will read it all.
Ok, it's time to show my thoughts - I have no title for my story yet and you can advise me smt... The story will be half-serious. I am not so good with jokes, but I'll try. I will write it about month. I hope I'll have enough time. This is real problem.
Storyline - group of losers, drunkards, druggies are travelling through the wastes. They solve many problems, they have many advantures... most of them even don't know what happens. Their luck can be 10. Some of them has such perks, as jinxed or bloody mess(I admit that I stole it from Sykotic. Sorry pal). Anyway, they survive all harshes of the wastes... There can be one hero, who saves their sorry asses, but only one... There can be several bad guys, who are hunting after them... They are following the great chosen one, they heard about, but often are mistaken as chosen one himself or some advanturers... They had to take some quests they solve or run away...
Timeline - all happens after the several months after the begining of FO 2. Chosen one is still somewhere out there, saving the world. But tales about him are roaming the wastes. That bunch of losers want to join him in his quest in search for honour and glory(and money and chics...). So they met each other in Den, full of his admirers, and decided to follow him.
Style and other stuff - if you want to join - feel free to do it. Style is not important. It will be good enough to understand what do you want to say and the storyline shouldn't be different from the main plot. You can create your own person, do with them all whatever you want... Try to write enough so it looked like long story, but it doesn't matter very much. One request - you must finish what you want to begin. Even if it means the death of your hero... :twisted:
Ok, once again. I am waiting for two days and begin the story. I surely can use one's help...
PROLOGUE
Chosen one left his village slowly. Hot sun was behind him. The great bridge to the wastes greeted him grimly. Cold air from the canyon below chill his blood... His soul was cold too. He left all he hold dear - his friends, his family, his people - all depended from he. Chosen one looked at his village last time and left it. Cold wind was the only one who said good bye to him... as it was decades ago with his ancestor. Lone figure went by the wastes, empy and emtionless. Chosen one felt nothing, but only chill wind. Blue suit didn't protect from it. It was becming colder every minute... suddenly chosen one heard the quiet lonely song. It was heard in wind itself, their words were sounded in one's heart. It was a song of the Hakunin, their tribe's shaman. Chosen one looked at the west, where he left his people, smiled quietly, I continued his journeys... He knew that he would be able to do it than...
Song of the Shaman.
From the sands of the Wastes,
From the depthes of the Vaults,
You were summoned above
To take quest with no faults.
In your travel below
Many dangers were found,
But by your mind and fists
It were taken care about.
Many legends were told,
Many tales were found,
But the one will remain
The untold and profound.
Many journeys ahead,
Many travels below.
From the end to the end,
And the death is reward...
... A hero you were called,
Your exploits shine as sun.
But darkness wails ahead
And the way is full of blood.
You will take a rest one day
And will leave a road ahead.
But people will never forget
And new heroes will rise instead...