Not fanfiction, but the first two chapters of my book. Sharing them at DML's suggestion, though I don't expect the reception to be overly friendly.
If you don't like something, tell me why you don't like it: saying "This sucks" doesn't give me any idea on how to improve something. And if you like something, also tell me why, so I know what I did right.
http://retlaw.deviantart.com/art/Chrome ... -135953909
http://retlaw.deviantart.com/art/Chrome ... -137361186
Chrome Warriors: The Future of Combat
Chrome Warriors: The Future of Combat
"You're going to have a tough time doing that without your head, palooka."
- the Vault Dweller
- the Vault Dweller