Chrome Warriors: The Future of Combat
Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 1:40 am
Not fanfiction, but the first two chapters of my book. Sharing them at DML's suggestion, though I don't expect the reception to be overly friendly.
If you don't like something, tell me why you don't like it: saying "This sucks" doesn't give me any idea on how to improve something. And if you like something, also tell me why, so I know what I did right.
http://retlaw.deviantart.com/art/Chrome ... -135953909
http://retlaw.deviantart.com/art/Chrome ... -137361186
If you don't like something, tell me why you don't like it: saying "This sucks" doesn't give me any idea on how to improve something. And if you like something, also tell me why, so I know what I did right.
http://retlaw.deviantart.com/art/Chrome ... -135953909
http://retlaw.deviantart.com/art/Chrome ... -137361186